Tom, You did a very good providing instruction to a standard position shoot for basketball. It was well combined with the video demo in the last 1/3 of the video. I feel the audience would benefit if you can throw in a few interesting questions at the beginning just to engage the audience into thinking the purpose of this video and keep them thinking about the following techniques. I also think that playing with the narration a bit should spicy up the video. Overall I really enjoy this instructional video and think that this would be a great project to provide a different form to communicate students’ writing. This would be a great writing project for students to talk about the sports they like or the sports starts they love. Did you share with the ELA teacher of your video? Any input from the ELA teacher?
Tom, You did a very good providing instruction to a standard position shoot for basketball. It was well combined with the video demo in the last 1/3 of the video. I feel the audience would benefit if you can throw in a few interesting questions at the beginning just to engage the audience into thinking the purpose of this video and keep them thinking about the following techniques. I also think that playing with the narration a bit should spicy up the video. Overall I really enjoy this instructional video and think that this would be a great project to provide a different form to communicate students’ writing. This would be a great writing project for students to talk about the sports they like or the sports starts they love. Did you share with the ELA teacher of your video? Any input from the ELA teacher?
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